That’s more better. Perfect levels, no room echo, very low background noise (although I can still hear you beating on your desk), good presence and narration swing.
That last could just be you’re getting used to the script.
I’m going to call that good on background noise, basically -63dB after processing. No noise reduction. Noise will go down more if you stop that oak/walnut woody rumble noise.
So you’re all set to face ACX Human Quality Control, since we have the automated robot technical tests licked.
https://forum.audacityteam.org/t/how-to-send-a-test-to-acx/49588/1
Koz