Hi guys,
Thanks for all the comments and help. Much appreciated.
Yes, it’s a genuine Shure55S, All the ones I’ve seen/had have had XLR connections. But no matter. It’s a good mic, and does voice pretty cleanly. A little ‘bright’ as you say, but not too bad. Makes for easier listening against noisy backgrounds.
Now, what went wrong with that original clip I have no idea. I listened to the file that Koz sent up, both in Vox, and in Audacity - and sounds the same. Uh Huh I thought, lets try this again, so I opened another window, and recorded about 4 minutes of my book sample - direct from the mic. Played it in Audacity - nice. Exported it to 32bit PCM WAV (Microsoft) and played it in VOX - nice, just the same.
I have no idea what I did wrong the first time. However, running ACXCheck on the file shows me that the Peak level is too high.
ACXCheck on 4" file
I made two sound clips, one the full 4 minutes, the second, about 10 seconds.
First Long Sample: http://www.chalmers.com.au/downloads/TheInnaminckaAffair-Sample-Long.wav About 56 Mb
Second Short Sample: http://www.chalmers.com.au/downloads/TheInnaminckaAffair-Sample.wav About 1.5Mb
Both from the same unedited file. No effects, nothing, just as it recorded into Audacity. It’s almost right except for the peaks, and I think I can solve that with a Pop filter strapped in front. I just have to get a new one now. And probably some soundproofing foam tiles to make a box to put the mic in.
So if I can get that peak down, and yes, I did cough once, and my voice sounds like I had too much Scotch the night before and I did… but all that I can fix 
I like the photo that Koz put up of the guy with the Shure. Looks about my age
I have my mic on a desk stand at the moment, but the suspending it overhead sounds like a good idea. I might try that to get it off the desk, and it also would make my head come up and stretch my throat a little for clearer speech. Good idea. Oh and yes, I am speaking into the little round S … and I can assure everyone that I am not Elvis even though the photo is a good likeness.! 
So all I need to do is get those levels right now, and it should be good to go. I’d hate to record hours and hours of sound and then have to do it all over again.
Thanks for the help,
Robert