Can i get some feedback on my balancing

I would like to know how well everything sounds in relation to everything else in this mix.

Your mp3 has peaks which are +4.7dB.
Zero dB is the maximum permitted without clipping, (-1dB headroom is typically used).
Your integrated loudness is -9.9LUFS.
The maximum permitted by YouTube is -14 LUFS, (i.e. 4dB too loud for YouTube).

too loud +5dB peaks
Youlean Loudness Meter - Free VST, AU and AAX plugin (free version)