Here's a link to a corrected version of your 15-min:
https://www.dropbox.com/sh/cpvrlgoab3q0 ... r17sa?dl=0
If I had had to read this, I certainly would have filled the entire 15 minutes with trying to pronounce the novel's title.
I've not used your attached noise profile because it wasn't available at the time...
I'm pretty sure that recording in mono will be better.
I hear lots of tiny clicks throughout the show. For instance during "...I kicked and gasped...".
My suspicion is that the driver settings are not yet properly set, i.e. mismatch of channels, sample rate, audio buffer length etc.
I've used the click removal at 30 % with 9 samples width.
However, that's not the way I like it to do.
You can hear the removed clicks by playing both tracks of my Audacity project at the same time (i.e. unsolo track 2).
There's also a slight de-essing portion applied (only needed for louder listening volumes actually).
The Rms is raised by 8 dB, from -30 to -21.9--rather much I'd say.
There are some manual edits as well.
Noticeably a longer pause at the beginning and before "Chapter".
As I like to say, pauses can easily be shortened but hardly extended.
Cheers
Robert