No clicks on that ("raw voice2").
It was Q2 that had the frequent metallic click ...
They usually correspond when your voice is loud, so not extraneous (e.g. computer) noise from the in the room.
They are on the raw version, so not caused by pitch shifting, (but will become more obvious by shifting down)
Acceptable is up to you and the customers. You don't have to meet anybody else's standards, so it's up to you.Acceptable, or too loud?
That's -16.9db RMS, (rather than -18), which is little bit too loud for me, (& my volume is only on 25%).
Fair warning, if you apply enough effects, filters, modifications, and corrections, you may get tools fighting each other and odd artifacts start to crawl out from under the rocks.For some reason, (mic rattle ?)