Edit
IMO de-ess the vocal a bit more.
( de-essing can only really be done on the vocal track in isolation not when it is in the final mix)
Thank you for the tip
IMO needs more dynamic range compression , in addition to de-essing …
Better results will be achieved if the de-essing and compression are be applied to the vocal track only ,
not to the final mix as I have done here.
I think You should add more power on kicks and snares:) generally it’s not bad but not in my taste