In order to record, this time I placed the smartphone (its the best recorder I currently have access to) on the table, diagonal to me but with the microphone pointing towards me. Last time I had the smartphone close to my face, which generated thuds from accidentally blowing to the microphones.
I don't have an educated ear that allows me to hear particular problems related to my recordings. I'm attaching a little fragment. Can you please help me identify what needs to be fixed? For example, last time I was told I had excessive sibilance. Do you hear that here as well? And what else?
I use Windows 8.1 and Audacity 2.4.1.
Thank you very much in advance