Feedback on my song?

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Did you do the singing pars, too, or only the rap voice? How did you get the backing track? It seems pretty clean. Did you buy it that way or make it from another song?

Or did you do the whole thing starting from an empty room?

A hip hop song i made

That covers a lot of ground.

Koz

The chorus/hook came with the beat
The intro/speech was added
And the rapping was done by me

I like the slap and echo that comes and goes. It keeps the monolog from sounding flat.
Koz